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Lisa 1
Lisa 2

Lisa 3

LIsa 4

Lisa 5

Lisa 6

Lisa 8

 

They were obviously having a party, and a noisy one, too. She still didn´t know their names, although strangely enough they had all turned out to be travelling to Achill Island as a result of the same invitation.
The guitar and the drum were in action now, and there was that interesting male again, but –with a woman in his arms who showed the silly expression of someone newly in love. „Well, that´s that", Lisa summed up the situation, „it is a pity, though". Looks as though they are CELEBRATING something."

While the singing and laughing kept getting louder , Lisa took a writing pad from her handbag and withdrew into her corner by the window. She knew she had to sort out her thinking, and  that writing would be the best way. „Dear Peter," she began, „you would never guess what I found out about this person Brian O´Donnell, or should I say, that trademark Brian O´Donnell …." She filled one page after the other, only looking up when there were irritating noises from her fellow passengers. Were they fighting now? That was definitely not sounding friendly. And who kept imitating a dog?

Nervously she drew her coat closer around her body, slipped the letter into its pocket, and pressed herself into her corner. Better not show attention, better avoid eye-contact , she told herself as she used to tell the young girls in her self-defense-classes back in Hamburg. She almost jumped when something brushed against her LEGS and then settled noisily behind them, panting and shaking with fear. „Good dog", she told him, reaching down to pat him gently on the shaggy head," no reason to worry. Just a bunch of drunken rascals . Nothing we cannot handle, the two of us." 
Who is comforting who, she wondered, but the encounter with her new companion had somehow raised her spirits immensely, and with renewed interest she kept looking out of the window, at fields and villages  passing by, at stations, where no packs of cigarettes were unloaded ( hommage á Heinrich Böll),  various shades of green,  various sounds all melting into the monotony of the train´s steady progress toward the West coast. People singing, people yelling, the dog snoring softly…

One lazy glance to make sure the –RED HANDBAG was there on the seat next to her – the bag with its reassuring contents, and Lisa fell asleep.

The sudden lack of movement and noises woke her with a start. There they were already leaving the train: the lovers, the guy with the guitar… Where was the dog? Well, he would see for himself. She reached up the pull down her suitcase, and hurried out onto the platform. Was this already Achill Island? „Wait!" she yelled, as she stumbled after the others, „wait for me …"

It was only when she had  joined them, that she realized that her HANDBAG was gone.
 

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